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after M. Silverstein
notes: the key question should have an answer that is answerable and non-obvious
"There is a great lacuna in the Literature"
"This is a Most Understudied Area"
"This area has received comparatively little attention..."
The Opening (somewhat better)
"Technique X has never been applied in area Y"
A: Propoal starts with a powerful current issue -- identity, ethnicity, gender, nationalism, race, hegemony, resistance, relations of states and indigenous people-- and discusses the theoretical formulations of this issue made by various people.B: There is a somewhat vague section dealing with field methods, suggesting that "appropriate" field recording methods will be applied
C: The proposal ends by making a rather loose and generalized connection between B and A
Too much discussion, especially in the Abstract and Introduction, of the general theoretical problem. Too little direct discussion of what the funding institution will be paying for.SMW 1/97