Thursday, August 17, 2006

Punctuation: comma after introductory element

Sometimes we assume that the comma after an introductory phrase or clause is optional--no big deal to leave it out. But this sentence proves that sometimes leaving it out creates real problems:
    If a store patron is attempting to steal the shopkeeper should be able to determine if a theft was committed by asking the suspect questions.
I like to use a comma after my introductory elements. I know this is "heavy" punctuation and that college writing teachers often don't require the introductory comma. But college teachers are usually teaching students to write fiction or essays. I'm teaching a form of technical writing.

I want the introductory comma.

6 Comments:

Anonymous Anonymous said...

Professor, just as I'm baffled by the disregard for the serial comma--at least outside of newspapers--I'm baffled by the disregard for the comma after an introductory element. Whether a sentence begins with a word serving as a "sentence adverb," a prepositional phrase or a participial phrase or an absolute phrase, or a subordinate clause, a sentence is so much clearer with the comma placed after an introductory element. A comma cleanly carves up a sentence into distinct pieces and enables the reader to understand exactly where the writer is going.

I'm reading a "clear writing" classic, which is excellent. But the one thing that throws me off every page or two is the author's omission of a comma after an introductory element--even fairly long subordinate clauses. Despite the trend towards "lighter" punctuation, I consider the comma an invaluable traffic signal in writing.

8:16 AM  
Blogger Wayne Schiess said...

You are right, anonymous. Thoughtful and careful use of commas does NOT clutter up writing or slow readers down. Overuse and underuse of commas do.

What is the "clear writing" classic you are reading? Just a guess: On Writing Well by Zinsser?

9:58 AM  
Anonymous Anonymous said...

For better or worse, Zinsser's book is still in my "pile of good intentions." The book I alluded to is Robert Gunning's "The Techniques of Clear Writing" (1968). I saw it mentioned favorably in some more recently published sources. I might be more annoyed by the absence of introductory commas if the writing weren't so good.

1:54 PM  
Blogger Wayne Schiess said...

The Technique of Clear Writing is a good book. I enjoyed it.

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